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hi! i wrote a novelette it contains 7,896 words
this is just the first page but the rest is amazing.. i wrote about 19 pages.. how much do i need?? i will be finished by 25 can i get it published?? i want to gt about 10-14 thousand words but i care about the quality rather than words..

I acted like I didn’t know the man, but I did. I had known him from my dreams, my nightmares, but not real life. I had been searching for him 3 decades, and now I had found him. I was in the grocery store picking out some oranges for Kendra, at home. That was her favourite fruit. He was grabbing a plastic bag out of the steel bin, and he looked so familiar. His eyes looked Chinese, but he wasn’t Chinese at all. I kept acting like I had never seen him in my life, but the whole thing bothered me. So I bumped into him. I just didn’t mean to do it so painfully.
“Excuse me?” the man glared at me.
“Oh I’m so sorry”, I said acting like the whole thing was an accident.
“Was it my fault?” he had a quiet English accent.
“No it was all mine, I am sorry again, but by the way are you from England?” I asked him. It was a stupid question but I just had to find some stuff out about this strange man I had seen before.
“Yes, I currently live there”, he said brushing some dust off his shirt and pants.
“I am just here trying to visit this one girl”, he said with his English voice getting higher.
“Oh, your girlfriend?” I asked him. He looked like he was in his low 30’s. But he would have said “my wife” if he was married.
“No I haven’t met her yet!” I looked at him differently. I squinted then rethought this thing over again.
“What if he is looking for me!” I asked my self.
“It’s confusing, I know. But she is in my dreams. And it is always placed here, in Lawton, Oklahoma”, he told me. And I immediately dropped the bag of oranges.
“That is exactly where my dream is placed”, I thought to myself. This is him for sure.
“And she looks familiar to you”, he told me. He started observing me and getting closer. I stepped back 1 step. I was starting to freak out.
“Are you okay?” he asked me. I know I didn’t seem okay but I was.
“Yes, but I have to tell you something”. I answered his question pretty quickly.
“What is it?” he looked deep into my big brown eyes. He had light green eyes that shined so bright.
“My dreams sound just like yours, but I am here looking for a man. And he happens to look exactly like you”, I said quietly.
“We have to meet up some time”, the man told me. I nodded then we shook hands.
“I’m Elizabeth Renner, but you can call me Eliza”, I told him. He smiled and his mouth came open. His teeth were as white as snow.
“And I am Holland Hernie, and you can just call me Holland”, He laughed then let go of my hand.
“We can meet up at my place tomorrow afternoon if you’d like”, I told him. It felt weird just letting a stranger be welcomed into my home, but he didn’t seem like a stranger to me. It felt like we had been friends since the sixth grade.
“Sure, I will need your address though”, he said and chuckled once more.
“Yeah, I live in a hotel right now with my daughter is that alright? She is four years old and definitely a well mannered sweet heart”, I told him. Trying to convince him my daughter was not a devil of any kind.

ENGLISH IS MY SECOND LANGUAGE….can i get this published?

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